While I love you and all your animations, I have to take a few points off from a perfect score.
Vision is 3/5 only because of the roughness. Clean lines alone would have boosted this to 5/5.
Originality is 5/5 for great character development in such a short time.
Technique is 5/5 for such smooth animation, no slacking in your 24 FPS! Weight and anticipation are spot-on!
Impact is 4/5 for the roughness as well. Compared to your finished "Style Dialogue Animation", impact was a bit underwhelming. Had this been critiqued once lined and/or colored, I would have given full marks. Never stop challenging yourself and improving.